Bassim
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- Joined
- Mar 1, 2008
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Bosnian
- Home Country
- Bosnia Herzegovina
- Current Location
- Sweden
I am wondering if my sentences sounds natural. Would you please correct my grammar and punctuation?
1. Anna has chosen to study philosophy as a revenge on her parents, who were obsessed with money and expensive gadgets.
2. As a revenge on his landlord, Peter has painted all walls of the flat in black, before moving away.
1. Anna has chosen to study philosophy as a revenge on her parents, who were obsessed with money and expensive gadgets.
2. As a revenge on his landlord, Peter has painted all walls of the flat in black, before moving away.