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    Kevin starts waking to the door, very nervous

    Hello.

    Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

    "Kevin starts waking to the door, very nervous. He feels someone grabs his arm."

    Thanks.

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    Re: Kevin starts waking to the door, very nervous

    Quote Originally Posted by Nikitus View Post

    Kevin feels very nervous as he starts walking towards the door. very nervous. He feels someone grab his arm.
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    Re: Kevin starts waking to the door, very nervous

    Quote Originally Posted by Nikitus View Post
    "Kevin starts walking to the door, very nervous. He feels someone grabs his arm."
    Apart from the two minor slips I have underlined. I think that's OK. teechar's version is, of course, also fine.

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