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    In modern societies, the expenses to make daily life are becoming more expensive

    In modern societies, the expenses to make daily life are becoming more expensive as the dependencies on science and technology is becoming a normal routine life.

    How to improve the above sentence? My point is 'expense is growing higher in today's world'.

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    Re: In modern societies, the expenses to make daily life are becoming more expensive

    "In modern societies, the expense of daily life is increasing as dependency on science and technology becomes an essential part of the normal routine of life".

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    Re: In modern societies, the expenses to make daily life are becoming more expensive

    "The cost of living is higher as technology becomes an essential part of normal life."

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    Re: In modern societies, the expenses to make daily life are becoming more expensive

    Quote Originally Posted by SoothingDave View Post
    "The cost of living is higher as technology becomes an essential part of normal life."
    Your version is more concise and still communicate same thought.

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    Re: In modern societies, the expenses to make daily life are becoming more expensive

    Well, I've been doing this since I was a toddler.

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