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    #1

    could you correct me a part of my CV?

    hi everyone,

    I’m learning English.
    could you correct me a part of my CV?
    Sorry for my mistakes.Thanks in advance


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    WORK EXPERIENCES:

    Giorgio Salvi Library of Florence



    Library Services Officer


    Civil Service Local – Italian Youth Guarantee
    Project Name: Library to (for?) the community



    From 10/2015 to 10/2016
    30 hours on 5 working days


    Main tasks:

    Front-office operations:

    - Local and interlibrary loan service through the Management program Fluxus.

    - Assisting the public in accessing the internet and other web-based services.



    Back-office operations:

    - Inventorying and library materials collocation on Easycat.
    - Shelving library materials by the Dewey Decimal Ststem.
    - Promoting the cultural initiatives of Library through creating posters and bookmarks, distribution of pamphlets and update Facebook page.


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    San Pellegrino spa – establishment Acqua Panna (Florence)
    Food industry producting mineal water


    production worker
    seasonal work for shift (also nocturnals)


    From 05/2015 to 09/2015


    Main Tasks:

    - Using the Management Program SAM-ERP 2 to manage traceability, production and quality (physical and visually control)
    - Using of manchinery in manufacturing to packaging and bottling lines (such as palletizer, depalletizer, bundling machine, case packer, decreater)
    - Replacing wrapping reels
    - Pallets label control
    -Using of electric pallet truck and forklift to unloading and loading pallets




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    Thanks a lot!
    Bye :)
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 24-Sep-2016 at 15:19. Reason: Removed formatting

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    #2

    Re: could you correct me a part of my CV?

    Quote Originally Posted by Simone1 View Post
    Hi everyone,

    I’m learning English.
    could you help me correct me a part of my CV?
    Sorry for my mistakes. Thanks in advance


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    WORK EXPERIENCE:

    Giorgio Salvi Library - Florence

    Library Services Officer


    Local Government Administration Civil Service Local – Italian Youth Guarantee
    Project Name: Community Library to (for?) the community

    From 10/2015 to 10/2016
    30 hours, on 5 working days per week.
    Main tasks:
    Front-office operations:
    - Local and inter-library loan service through using the Management program Fluxus library software.
    - Assisting the public in accessing the Internet and other web-based services.
    Back-office operations:
    - Inventorying and library materials collocation on Easycat.
    - Shelving library materials by according to the Dewey Decimal System.
    - Promoting the cultural initiatives of the library through creating by making and distributing posters, and bookmarks, distribution of and pamphlets and updating the library's Facebook page.


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    San Pellegrino spa – establishment Acqua Panna (Florence)
    Food industry company producing mineral water


    Production worker
    seasonal work for including night shifts (also nocturnals)

    From 05/2015 to 09/2015

    Main Tasks:
    - Using the Management Program SAM-ERP 2 to manage traceability, production and quality (physical and visual) control.
    - Using of Operating machinery in manufacturing to of packaging and bottling lines (such as palletizer, depalletizer, bundling machine, case packer, and decreater [ I don't know what that means. ]).
    - Replacing wrapping reels
    - Pallet label control
    - Using of electric pallet truck and forklift to unload ing and load ing pallets
    Don't forget to use a nice (clear and simple) format for your CV.

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    #3

    Re: could you correct me a part of my CV?

    Thank you very much.
    You have been very kind!

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    #4

    Re: could you correct me a part of my CV?

    Your thanks are appreciated, Simone1, but please note that there is no reason to write a post to say "Thank you" to anyone. Simply click on the "Thank" button in the bottom left-hand corner of any post you find helpful. Try it now by clicking "Thank" on post #2.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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