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    #1

    Could you correct another text for me?

    Good Evening!
    It's a gorgeous forum.

    Under down the're many sentences that I could do in front of my supposed employers.

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    I have lots of questions for you!

    1) Did you hosted an au pair???

    2) How was it?

    3) How many au pair you hosted?

    4) What do you expect from this experience??

    5) Were there any problems with an au pair?? h
    How old is it(she/he)??

    6) What time she/he stayed with us?

    7) How the au pair find with your family? did she find her well?

    8) What do you prefer for your children? a man or a woman?
    Is it a problem have a man like au pair for you?

    9) Why you contacted me instead of another person?
    What you impressed in my description?
    How many people have you contacted before me?

    10) Do my English can be a problem for you?
    What English level must know your au pair?

    11) Do you have remained in touch with the previous au-pair?

    12) Have the children been fonded of (name au-pair)?

    13) Is it weird/unusual that a man do the au pair?
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    To write this text I didnít use ďgoogle translateĒ but I asked for help a friend and sometimes I used Internet to search words that I didnít know.
    Ö...And it took too much time! :)

    In Italian culture there isnít this habit to host au-pair.
    On Internet I read that the most au pair are female.

    I don't know people that did this experience but on Internet I've read positive feedbacks.

    Before leaving I want have more information possible about you.
    I would like to do conversations on Skype or via email with you.
    I donít want surprise. I demand and honesty and frankness.

    It thereíre doubts, tell me earlier please
    You valuate my English though interviews.

    It's a new experience.
    I haven't been in the foreign country.
    Itís a changeling radical of the habits.
    I'm a little upset.
    There's a little fear but I'm happy.
    Iím sure to do it.
    Iím ready to put myself to the test.
    If I don't sicure to do it, i don't register in this site!
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    Thank you very much who had patience to correct this text for me!

  1. teechar's Avatar
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    #2

    Re: Could you correct another text for me?

    Quote Originally Posted by Simone1 View Post
    6) What time she/he stayed with us?
    I don't understand that.

    Quote Originally Posted by Simone1 View Post
    7) How the au pair find with your family? did she find her well?
    Do you mean if the au pair liked the family?

    Quote Originally Posted by Simone1 View Post
    Ö...And it took too much time! :)
    That's rather vague. Explain what you meany by it.

    Quote Originally Posted by Simone1 View Post
    Itís a changeling radical of the habits.
    There's a little fear but I'm happy.
    Iím sure to do it.
    Iím ready to put myself to the test.
    If I don't sicure to do it, i don't register in this site!
    I'm not sure what you mean by the above. Please explain/elaborate.

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    #3

    Re: Could you correct another text for me?

    6) What time she/he stayed with you?
    7) I want to know if the family liked the previous au pair


    since my English is basic, I took too long to write this text.


    During the hypothetical interview (via Skype or via e-mail) I could express the way that I feel.

    ....If I didn't sure to do it, i didn't register in this site (au pairs site)!

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    #4

    Re: Could you correct another text for me?

    Quote Originally Posted by Simone1 View Post
    Good Evening!
    It's a gorgeous forum.

    Under down the're many sentences that I could do in front of my supposed employers.(It is a wrong sentence)

    --------------------
    I have lots of questions for you!

    1) Did you hosted an au pair??? ( Have you hosted an au pair??)

    2) How was it?

    3) How many au pair you hosted?(How many au pair have you hosted?)

    4) What do you expect from this experience??

    5) Were there any problems with an au pair?? h
    How old is it(she/he)??

    6) What time she/he stayed with us?(How long she/he stayed with us)

    7) How the au pair find with your family? did she find her well?

    8) What do you prefer for your children? a man or a woman?
    Is it a problem have a man like au pair for you?(Do you have a problem having a man like au pair with you?)

    9) Why you contacted me instead of another person?(why have you contacted me, you should have called the other person.)
    What you impressed in my description?
    How many people have you contacted before me?

    10) Do my English can be a problem for you?
    What English level must know your au pair?

    11) Do you have remained in touch with the previous au-pair?(Do you keep in touch with the previous au-pair?)

    12) Have the children been fonded of (name au-pair)?

    13) Is it weird/unusual that a man do the au pair?
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    To write this text I didn’t use “google translate” but I asked for help a friend and sometimes I used Internet to search words that I didn’t know.
    …...And it took too much time! :)

    In Italian culture there isn’t this habit to host au-pair.
    On Internet I read that the most au pair are female.

    I don't know people that did this experience but on Internet I've read positive feedbacks.

    Before leaving I want have more information possible about you.
    I would like to do conversations on Skype or via email with you.
    I don’t want surprise. I demand and honesty and frankness.

    It there’re doubts, tell me earlier please
    You valuate my English though interviews.

    It's a new experience.
    I haven't been in the foreign country.(I have never been to a foreign nation)
    It’s a changeling radical of the habits.
    I'm a little upset.
    There's a little fear but I'm happy.
    I’m sure to do it.
    I’m ready to put myself to the test.
    If I don't sicure to do it, i don't register in this site!
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    Thank you very much who had patience to correct this text for me!
    I am not an expert nor a native speaker.
    Last edited by rock-onn; 27-Sep-2016 at 10:51.

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    #5

    Re: Could you correct another text for me?

    Quote Originally Posted by Simone1 View Post
    Good Evening!
    It's a gorgeous This is a wonderful forum.

    Under down the'reBelow are many sentences that I might need to use with could do in front of my supposed potential employers.

    --------------------
    I have lots of questions for you!

    1) Did Have you (ever) hosted an au pair?

    2) How was it?

    3) How many au pairs have you hosted?

    4) What do you expect from this experience?

    5) Were there any problems with any of the au pairs you hosted?
    How old is it( was she/he?

    6) What time Which year did she/he stay ed with you? us?

    7) How did the au pair find get on with your family? did she find her well?

    8) Do you prefer to have a male or female au pair? What do you prefer for your children? a man or a woman?
    Is it a problem for you to have a man like as au pair? for you?

    9) Why have you contacted me instead of another person?
    What you impressed you most about in my profile? description?
    How many people have you contacted before me?

    10) Do you think my English can be a problem for you?
    What level of English level must know your do you expect in an au pair?

    11) Do Have you have remained in touch with the previous au-pairs?

    12) Have Were the children been fond ed of (name au-pair)?

    13) Do you consider Is it weird/unusual that a man do the works as au pair?

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    To write this text, I didn't use ďGoogle translateĒ, but I asked a friend for help, a friend and sometimes I used the Internet to search for words that I didnít know; Ö...A and it took me a long too much time!

    In Italian culture, there isnít this habit to an established tradition of hosting au-pairs.

    On the Internet, I read that the most au pairs are females.

    I don't know people that worked as au pairs, did this experience but on the Internet I've read plenty of positive feedback about it.

    Before leaving, I want would like to have some more information, if possible, about you.
    I would like to do have conversations on Skype or to correspond via email with you.
    I donít want any surprises in store, and I'm sure you don't want that either. I demand and believe honesty and frankness are important.

    It thereíre doubts, tell me earlier please
    If you have any doubts, reservations or concerns, or if you need any clarification, please let me know sooner rather than later.

    You can assess valuate my English though when you interview me.

    It's This is a new experience for me.
    I haven't been in the to a foreign country before.

    Itís a changeling radical of the habits. [I have no idea what that means.]
    I'm a little apprehensive. upset.
    There's a little fear but I'm happy. [I have no idea what that means.]
    Iím sure to confident that I can do it.
    Iím up for the challenge. ready to put myself to the test.
    If I wasn't sure that I wanted to do this, I wouldn't have don't sicure to do it, i don't registered in on this site!
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