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    #1

    The ceiling looked like a black abyss.

    Are these sentences correctly constructed regarding inversion?

    1."The ceiling looked like a black abyss, projecting out of which were blue rays."

    2."The ceiling looked like a black abyss, projecting out of which there were blue rays."

    Also is the existential there as is being used in the second sentence redundant?


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    Last edited by Rover_KE; 27-Sep-2016 at 13:28.

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    #2

    Re: The ceiling looked like a black abyss.

    I think all abysses are black.

    The "there" is not necessary.

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