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    Zoe2008 is offline Key Member
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    Please help to correct my message. Thanks

    I am refuse a new job and write a message to the employer. Please help to correct the message to be more polite and feel comfortable.


    I am apologize that i will not come to work at your company as I have another job offer. Thank you for your kindness, hope we have opportunity in the future.

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    tedmc is offline VIP Member
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    Re: Please help to correct my message. Thanks

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    I am refuse wish to turn down a new job and want to write a message to the employer. Please help me to make correct the message to be more polite and feel comfortable natural.


    I am apologize that i will not come to work at your company as I have another job offer. Thank you for your kindness, hope we have opportunity in the future.

    I am sorry to inform you that I am unable to accept the job offer from your company as I have accepted another job offer. Thank you.
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    I am not a teacher or a native speaker.

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