[Grammar] Please help to correct my message. Thanks

[Zoe2008]

I am refuse a new job and write a message to the employer. Please help to correct the message to be more polite and feel comfortable.


I am apologize that i will not come to work at your company as I have another job offer. Thank you for your kindness, hope we have opportunity in the future.

 

[tedmc]

I [STRIKE]am refuse [/STRIKE] wish to turn down a [STRIKE]new[/STRIKE] job and want to write a message to the employer. Please help me to make [STRIKE]correct [/STRIKE]the message [STRIKE]to be[/STRIKE] more polite and[STRIKE] feel comfortable[/STRIKE] natural.


I am apologize that i will not come to work at your company as I have another job offer. Thank you for your kindness, hope we have opportunity in the future.

I am sorry to inform you that I am unable to accept the job offer from your company as I have accepted another job offer. Thank you.

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