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    Work permit and part-time job

    Granting a work permit to full-time students aroused a heated debate during the past decade. While some claim that it hurts the economy, depriving locals of job opportunities, others think that it is an important source of income for students. Personally, I agree that full-time students should have the right to work.


    Firstly, it is well-known that tuition fees increase yearly with no equivalent increase in students' stipend if they have any. For example, I am a Ph.D. student at the University of British Columbia and I face this problem. Additionally, rent prices and living expenses follow the same trend as tuition fees.

    Secondly, it is important for student's resume to have some work experience. That gives any future employer some confidence in person's ability to perform in a professional environment.


    In conclusion, the part-time job is a vital need for students, not only financially, but also for career progression and job market penetration.

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    Could you please correct this essay ?

    Thanks for your time.

    This is not a homework, just an IELTS essay:

    "some people say part-time jobs are useful for full-time students because they not only earn money but also gain career experience. Do you agree or disagree ?"
    Last edited by ahmednasha2y; 01-Oct-2016 at 08:59.

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    Re: Work permit and part-time job

    Take a look at my reply to your other essay post.
    https://www.usingenglish.com/forum/t...242812-History

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    Re: Work permit and part-time job

    http://ieltsadvantage.com/2015/03/03...ay-structures/

    Please click on the above link and read the material which will guide you how you should structure your essay in IELTS.

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    Re: Work permit and part-time job

    Is 'a' required or not before 'student's resume' in the sentence 'it is important for student's resume to have some work experience.'?

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