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    The body glucose level.

    "Your body glucose level has reached that point, which once gets crossed you start having a lot of problems."

    "Your body glucose has reached that level which you once get past of, you start getting sick."

    Please check.

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    Re: The body glucose level.

    Your glucose level has reached a point over which you might start having problems.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: The body glucose level.

    Your glucose level has reached the unhealthy limit.
    Last edited by tedmc; 03-Oct-2016 at 15:19.
    I am not a teacher.

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    #4

    Re: The body glucose level.

    I would use "beyond" instead of "over" in emsr2d2's sentence in post #2.

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    Re: The body glucose level.

    Quote Originally Posted by teechar View Post
    I would use "beyond" instead of "over" in emsr2d2's sentence in post #2.
    I would use above because we can imagine a scale.

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    Re: The body glucose level.

    Blood sugar level?

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    Re: The body glucose level.

    "Your body glucose level has reached a point beyond which, you will start having a lot of problems."

    "Your body glucose has reached that level (can we use "that level" instead of "a point"?) beyond which, people start getting sick."

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    Re: The body glucose level.

    I would change body glucose to blood sugar, and would delete the commas after which.

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    Re: The body glucose level.

    "Your blood sugar level has reached a point beyond which you will start having a lot of problems."

    "Your blood sugar has reached that level beyond which people start getting sick."

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