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    Please help me to correct the garmmer

    I am looking for a new job. I am appreciate if someone can help me to corret the garmmer and rewrite the sentence which start with "I". It seems like I wrote too much "I" beginning sentences......

    Dear xx,

    Re: Junior Assistant Accountant Vacancy

    I'm writing to express my interest in the recently advertised Junior Assistant Accountant role.

    I am working at a Chartered Accounting firm for last two years, where I have developed my accounting and office administration skills, now looking for a new challenge for further development.

    I believe my knowledge and experience in accounting and office administration would provide a strong foundation that allows me work accurately and efficiently.
    Taking in charge of more than 200 clients, I am able to work organized and under high pressure. I have developed good communication skills and ability to build long-term relationship with clients and colleagues. I am a quick learner and develop new skills with a positive attitude as well as being really flexible. I am a friendly, energetic and conscientious person who works hard and pays attention to detail.

    I have enclosed my CV to support my application. It includes a variety range of qualities/skillset I possess which I believe is very important for this position:

    It would be much appreciated if you can offer me an opportunity for this position and please feel free to phone or email me if you have any preliminary questions about this request.

    Thank you for taking the time to consider my application and I am looking forward to hearing from you in the near future.


    Yours faithfully,

    xxx

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    Re: Please help me to correct the garmmer

    Quote Originally Posted by Crazyseeking View Post
    I am looking for a new job. I am would appreciate it if someone can help me to correct the garmmr grammar and rewrite the sentences which start with "I". It seems like I wrote too much "I" many sentences beginning with "I." sentences......

    Dear xx,

    Re: Junior Assistant Accountant Vacancy

    I'm writing to express my interest in the recently advertised Junior Assistant Accountant position. role.

    I am have been working at a chartered accounting firm for the last two years, where I have developed my strong accounting and office-administration skills, and now I'm looking for a new challenge for to further develop my career. ment.

    I believe my knowledge and experience in accounting and office administration would provide a strong foundation that allows me to work achieve a high level of accuracy tely and efficiency in my work. tly.

    Taking Being in charge of more than 200 clients' accounts, I am able to work highly organized and work well under high pressure. I have developed good communication skills and the ability to build long-term relationships with clients and colleagues. Moreover, I am a quick learner and develop always ready to embrace change new skills with a positive attitude as well as being really and flexiblity. My colleagues and senior supervisors describe me as I am a friendly, energetic and conscientious person who works hard and pays attention to detail.

    I have enclosed my CV to support my application. It includes a variety range of qualities/skillset I possess which I believe is very important for this position:

    It would be much appreciated if you can offer me an opportunity for this position and Please feel free to phone or email me if you require further information. have any preliminary questions about this request.

    Thank you for taking the time to consider my application, and I am look ing forward to hearing from you in the near future.


    Yours sincerely, faithfully,

    xxx
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    Re: Please help me to correct the garmmer

    Hi Teecheer,
    Thank you for your help. It is very useful. Could you help me to correct the following resume as well? I want to confirm whether the "-ing" used correct or not. I would appreciate for you patient. Thanks.

    Curriculum Vitae

    Full Name: xxx
    Address:
    Tel:
    Email:

    PERSONAL STATEMENT

    Accounting graduate from xxx Univercity with Bachelor of Accounting Degree, have two years accounting firm experience and now in charge more than 200 clients, looking for a position in the accounting field to gain further experience and make a contribution to the company.


    KEY SKILLS

    Accounting skills:
    • Xero (Xero certified advisor), Xero add-ons (Inventory, Payroll), MYOB, Workflowmax, Flexitime Online Payroll, IRD, Companies Office website, etc
    • Accounts Reconciliation, GST, PAYE, FBT, Financial Statements, Working for Family Tax Credit, Penalty Leave, Cash Flow Forecast, Debtor management, Clients’ and IRD query solution

    Computer skills: Microsoft Office Word, Excel, Power Point, PDF, and Internet.

    Business skills:
    • Languages: Can communicate with clients in English and Mandarin.
    • Excellent accountancy and business knowledge and skills
    • Reporting entity accounting with a focus on accounting standards for the purpose of preparing general-purpose financial statements.
    • Problem solving and decision making by creating, evaluating and assessing options.
    • Excellent organizational and time management skills.
    • Understanding ethical issues towards careers responsibility



    RELEVANT WORK HISTORY


    XXXX Limited (CA Firm) May 201x - now
    Assistant Accountant
    My responsibilities include:
    Prepared financial statements and tax returns for enterprises, directly reported to the senior accountant.
    Meeting clients and providing accounting and Xero advice, New Zealand taxation services such as GST, PAYE, FBT preparations, IRD compliance, Family Tax Credit, etc..
    Managing our internship students with their admin jobs.
    Providing Xero customer support, answer queries, liaising clients and IRD via phone and email
    Other Ad hoc works


    xxxxx (CA Firm) Aug 201x – May 201x
    Assistant accountant
    My responsibilities include:
    Carrying out bank reconciliation
    Processing payroll and maintaining employee records
    Apply IRD number for company and individual, including resident/non-resident or off-shore
    Provided customer service and handled queries
    Prepare working for family tax credit application and penalty leave application for employee/self-employed
    Enter and upload invoice into system, processing and sending invoices and receipts to debtors

    xxxxxx
    Bookkeeper &Office Administrator (Internship) Mar 201x- Dec 201x
    My responsibilities include:
    Daily data entry , PAYE and GST information collection
    Office Administration, these include:
    Managing internal and external correspondence and emails
    Arranged meetings for clients and accountants and was in charge of taking notes
    Answer incoming call, file and scan of document and files
    Preparing monthly fee invoices and statements and collecting debtor.
    Maintenance database and system
    Register Company and renew annual return

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    Re: Please help me to correct the garmmer

    Quote Originally Posted by Crazyseeking View Post
    Curriculum Vitae

    Full Name: xxx
    Address:
    Tel:
    Email:

    PERSONAL STATEMENT
    Accounting graduate from xxx Univercity with Bachelor of Accounting Degree, have and two years' accounting firm experience at an accounting firm. and now Currently in charge of more than 200 client accounts; looking for a position in the accounting field to gain further professional experience. and make a contribution to the company.


    KEY SKILLS
    Accounting skills:
    Xero (Xero certified advisor), Xero add-ons (Inventory, Payroll), MYOB, Workflowmax, Flexitime Online Payroll, IRD, Companies Office website, etc.
    Accounts reconciliation, GST, PAYE, FBT, financial statements, Working for Families Tax Credits, penalty leave, cash-flow forecasts, debtor management, client and IRD query solutions.

    Computer skills: Microsoft Office Word, Excel, Power Point; Adobe PDF Creator, and various office software. Internet.

    Business skills:
    Languages: Can communicate with clients Fluent in English and Mandarin.
    Excellent accountancy and business knowledge and skills
    Reporting-entity accounting with a focus on accounting standards for the purpose of preparing general-purpose financial statements.
    Proven problem-solving and decision-making skills - by proposing, creating, evaluating and assessing options.
    Excellent organizational and time-management skills.
    Strong understanding of ethical issues towards careers and professional responsibility.



    RELEVANT WORK HISTORY

    XXXX Limited (CA Firm) May 201x - present
    Assistant Accountant
    Main duties: y responsibilities include:
    Preparing financial statements and tax returns for enterprises, directly and reporting directly to the senior accountant.
    Meeting clients and providing accounting and Xero advice, New Zealand taxation services such as GST, PAYE, FBT preparations, IRD compliance, Family Tax Credits, etc.
    Managing our Assisting internship students with their admin jobs.
    Providing Xero customer support, answering queries, liaising with clients and IRD via phone and email.
    Other miscellaneous tasks. Ad hoc works


    xxxxx (CA Firm) Aug 201x May 201x
    Assistant accountant
    Main duties: y responsibilities include:
    Carrying out bank reconciliation.
    Processing payroll and maintaining employee records.
    Applying for IRD number for companies and individuals, including resident/non-resident or off-shore clients.
    Providing customer service and handling queries.
    Preparing Working for Families Tax Credits applications and penalty-leave applications for employees and self-employed clients.
    Entering and uploading invoices into system; processing and sending invoices and receipts to debtors.

    xxxxxx
    Bookkeeper & Office Administrator (Internship) Mar 201x- Dec 201x
    Main duties: y responsibilities include:
    Daily Data entry, PAYE and GST information collection
    Office Administration tasks, these including:
    - Managing internal and external correspondence and emails.
    - Arranging meetings for with clients and accountants and was in charge of taking meeting notes.
    - Answering incoming calls, filing and scanning of documents and files.
    - Preparing monthly fee invoices and statements and collecting debts.
    - Maintaining database and system.
    - Assisting with company registeration Company applications and renewals. annual return
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    Re: Please help me to correct the garmmer

    Note the correct spelling of "grammar" (not "garmmer" as you used in your title).
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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