Crazyseeking
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- Joined
- Oct 4, 2016
- Member Type
- Other
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- China
- Current Location
- New Zealand
I am looking for a new job. I am appreciate if someone can help me to corret the garmmer and rewrite the sentence which start with "I". It seems like I wrote too much "I" beginning sentences......
Dear xx,
Re: Junior Assistant Accountant Vacancy
I'm writing to express my interest in the recently advertised Junior Assistant Accountant role.
I am working at a Chartered Accounting firm for last two years, where I have developed my accounting and office administration skills, now looking for a new challenge for further development.
I believe my knowledge and experience in accounting and office administration would provide a strong foundation that allows me work accurately and efficiently.
Taking in charge of more than 200 clients, I am able to work organized and under high pressure. I have developed good communication skills and ability to build long-term relationship with clients and colleagues. I am a quick learner and develop new skills with a positive attitude as well as being really flexible. I am a friendly, energetic and conscientious person who works hard and pays attention to detail.
I have enclosed my CV to support my application. It includes a variety range of qualities/skillset I possess which I believe is very important for this position:
It would be much appreciated if you can offer me an opportunity for this position and please feel free to phone or email me if you have any preliminary questions about this request.
Thank you for taking the time to consider my application and I am looking forward to hearing from you in the near future.
Yours faithfully,
xxx
Dear xx,
Re: Junior Assistant Accountant Vacancy
I'm writing to express my interest in the recently advertised Junior Assistant Accountant role.
I am working at a Chartered Accounting firm for last two years, where I have developed my accounting and office administration skills, now looking for a new challenge for further development.
I believe my knowledge and experience in accounting and office administration would provide a strong foundation that allows me work accurately and efficiently.
Taking in charge of more than 200 clients, I am able to work organized and under high pressure. I have developed good communication skills and ability to build long-term relationship with clients and colleagues. I am a quick learner and develop new skills with a positive attitude as well as being really flexible. I am a friendly, energetic and conscientious person who works hard and pays attention to detail.
I have enclosed my CV to support my application. It includes a variety range of qualities/skillset I possess which I believe is very important for this position:
It would be much appreciated if you can offer me an opportunity for this position and please feel free to phone or email me if you have any preliminary questions about this request.
Thank you for taking the time to consider my application and I am looking forward to hearing from you in the near future.
Yours faithfully,
xxx