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What's up my Native English speaking bros. I need your help once again. I had to write a formal email and ask about some stuff. I'm approaching the final exams next year so I would greately appreciate if you could point out any errors you can find in my email. If you could give me some advice or suggest how some sentence could be rewritten to look or sound better it would be even better. Thank you so much!
Dear Barbara Shields
My name is Kristin, I'm the Paolo Massini assistant.
I'm writing to you on behalf of Paolo Massini to enquire about some details associated with the Natural Solutions traid fair that we're going to take part in.
We plan to participate in the whole trade fair and we'd like to know if we can count on some sort of discount owing to that.
Are there going to be any social events on the spot? That could greately increase the amount of people around our stand thus it's very important to us.
We'd also like to know more about what facilities can we expect on the spot. Internet access would be very helpful for communication and organising the whole stand.
Is there any restaurant nearby? That would be very convinient for the customer reception.
And last but not least, we couldn't find any info on your website on accommodation, it's necessary for us to know the details about it while we're planning our departure. I would greately appreciate a quick reply.
Last edited by Korargol; 05-Oct-2016 at 20:35.