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    CONFIDENT WITH BANANA PEEL
    Banana peels contain fiber, antioxidant, and rich in pottasium. May I know, what will you do after eat banana? You will throw away the peels, right? Do you know banana peels have many benefits for your skin? Yeah, banana peels have many benefits that are not less useful as banana itself. 1. Instead of bleaching teeth spend much money, preferably bleaching your teeth with banana peel naturally. Do you want to have teeth as white as famous artists? Bleaching teeth is the solution for them that has much money. How about you that do not have much money to bleaching your teeth like them? You can buy one banana and eat banana, but do not throw away the peel. Banana peel is the way to bleaching your teeth. Bleaching your teeth with banana peel is the easiest. Just take the banana peel, the rub the inside of banana peel on your teeth smoothly for a few minutes. After that, rinse your mouth. Do it at 1-2 times is a day. 2. The content of antioxidants and other nutrients in the banana peel can eliminate acnes. You may eliminate your acnes with beauty products that contain chemicals, but natural is better, is not it? Well, banana peels can eliminate your acnes. Just rub it smoothly on your face for a few minutes. Then rinse your face and do it three times in a day. 3. If there are no cucumbers, banana peels can eliminate your puffy eyes. After have eaten the fruit, you can really take advantage of its peel to compress your puffy eyes. You can do this by taking a few pieces of banan peels, then put it on your puffy eyes. Finally, your eyes will be fresh and say “bye bye puffy eyes!” 4. Banana peels can brighten your skin. Instead of using a lightening products that are made from chemicals, it is better for you to use banana peels only. You can rub the banana peel smoothly on your skin for a few minutes. Let stand it for a moment. Then, rinse thoroughly. 5. Believe or not, banana peels will make you ageless. You can rub the banana peel on the wrinkle face. Then, let stand it on the face around 30 minutes. Then, rinse your face. For your information, some people even silence the banana peels which is used as a mask overnight.

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    Re: Please correct the grammar

    Quote Originally Posted by dianseptiyani View Post
    CONFIDENT WITH BANANA PEEL
    Banana peels contains fiber and antioxidants, and is rich in potassium. May I know what will you do with the peel after you eat a banana? You will throw it away, the peels, right? Do But did you know that banana peel have has many benefits for your skin? Yeah, banana peels have many In fact, those benefits that are no less useful as than the banana itself.

    Here are some of the proven benefits of banana peel.

    1. Instead of spending a lot of money on expensive tooth-whitening treatments, bleaching teeth spend much money, preferably you can bleach ing your own teeth with banana peel naturally. Do you want to have teeth as white as famous celebrities? artists? Then banana peel is the answer. The next time you eat a banana, don't throw away the peel. Bleaching teeth is the solution for them that has much money. How about you that do not have much money to bleaching your teeth like them? You can buy one banana and eat banana, but do not throw away the peel. Banana peel is the way to bleaching your teeth. Bleaching your teeth with banana peel is the easiest. Just take the banana peel, then rub the inside of banana the peel onto your teeth smoothly for a few minutes. After that, rinse your mouth. Do it at 1-2 times is a day. You'll be amazed with the results.

    2.
    The content high level of antioxidants and other nutrients in the bananas peel can help eliminate acne. You may eliminate treat your acne with beauty skin products that contain chemicals, but surely the natural option is better, is it not? it? Well, banana peel can actually eliminate your acne. Just rub it smoothly on your face for a few minutes. Then rinse your face; and do it repeat that procedure three times in a day.

    3.
    If there are no Bananas can be an alternative to cucumbers , banana peels can eliminate for soothing your puffy eyes. After you have eaten the fruit, you can really take advantage of its peel to as a relaxing eye compress. your puffy eyes. You can do this by taking placing a few pieces of banana peel , then put it on your puffy eyelids. Finally, Your eyes will thank you, be fresh and you can say “bye bye puffy eyes!”

    4.
    Banana peel can brighten your skin. Instead of using artificial lightening products that are made from chemicals, it is better for you to use banana peel. only. You can rub the banana peel smoothly on your skin for a few minutes, let it stand it for a moment, then rinse your skin thoroughly.

    5.
    Believe it or not, banana peel will make you ageless. You can rub the banana peel on the any wrinkles in your face, Then, let stand it on the face leave it there for around 30 minutes, then rinse your face. For your information, some people even silence the use banana peel which is used as an overnight face mask. overnight.
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    Re: Please correct the grammar

    You need to start with either "Banana peels contain fibre, antioxidants and are rich in potassium" or "Banana peel contains fibre, antioxidants and is rich in potassium".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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