[CV] did I write well these senteces?

[Simone1]

These are my hobbies to insert in my CV.

did I write well them in English?

Extracurricular activities:

I love physical activity in general.
Among my interests there are football on TV and that played, the latter I played at a competitive level until adolescence.

I still have played five a-side football at amateur level and swimming.

I am a lover of the bike. Fan of cinema.

I like read mainly essays on current events.





Thank you very much!

 

[emsr2d2]

These are my hobbies to insert in my CV.

​Did I write [STRIKE]well[/STRIKE] them well in English?

Extracurricular activities:

[STRIKE]I love physical activity in general.[/STRIKE] Unnecessary - you are going to give examples of physical activity later.

Among my interests [STRIKE]there[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]are[/STRIKE] are watching football, [STRIKE]on TV [/STRIKE][STRIKE]and that played, the latter[/STRIKE] which I [STRIKE]played[/STRIKE] used to play at a competitive level until adolescence, [STRIKE]I still have played[/STRIKE] swimming, and playing five a-side football. [STRIKE]at amateur level and swimming.[/STRIKE]

[STRIKE]I am a lover of the bike. [/STRIKE] I enjoy riding my bike/motorbike.

I am a great fan of cinema and I like to read [STRIKE]mainly[/STRIKE] essays [STRIKE]on[/STRIKE] about current events.

Thank you very much!

See above. Note that your title should have included some of the words from your extracurricular activities. The word order was wrong in your title anyway. It should have been "Did I write these sentences well?"