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    Please amend and edit the email

    Hi, I wrote the below email and please help me correct it if there is any mistake. Many thanks!


    It has been informed that tomorrow will be the expiry date for the lease and the handover date of the Premises. We understand your difficulty for the reinstatement works, however, one week has already be given for your company to follow matters related to the surrender of the Premises. If things cannot be settled on tomorrow (the said handover date) , probably extra rent shall be paid for another extension period. Thank you.

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    Re: Please amend and edit the email

    Quote Originally Posted by yslamac View Post
    Hi, I wrote the below email and please help me correct it if there is any mistake. Many thanks!


    It has been informed This is to inform you that tomorrow will be the expiry date for of the lease and the handover date of the premises. We understand your difficulty for with the reinstatement works. However, a one week grace period has already been given to you for your company to follow settle matters related to the surrender of the premises. If things cannot be settled on by tomorrow (the said handover date), probably extra rent shall be paid for another extension period, you will be liable to pay additional rent for the extended period. Thank you.
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    Re: Please amend and edit the email

    ... a one-week grace period ...
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Please amend and edit the email

    Quote Originally Posted by Gregory741 View Post
    I like how the prelast user tedmc edited your work. Have a look at his/her remarks and you will see that the weakest side of yours is the part about prepositions one of your weaknesses is the use of prepositions.
    'Prelast' is not an English word.

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