[General] Please amend and edit the email

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yslamac

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Hi, I wrote the below email and please help me correct it if there is any mistake. Many thanks!:-D


It has been informed that tomorrow will be the expiry date for the lease and the handover date of the Premises. We understand your difficulty for the reinstatement works, however, one week has already be given for your company to follow matters related to the surrender of the Premises. If things cannot be settled on tomorrow (the said handover date) , probably extra rent shall be paid for another extension period. Thank you.
 

tedmc

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Hi, I wrote the below email and please help me correct it if there is any mistake. Many thanks!:-D


[STRIKE]It has been informed [/STRIKE] This is to inform you that tomorrow will be the expiry date [STRIKE]for[/STRIKE] of the lease and the handover date of the premises. We understand your difficulty [STRIKE]for[/STRIKE] with the reinstatement works. However, a one week grace period has already been given to you for your company to [STRIKE]follow[/STRIKE] settle matters related to the surrender of the premises. If things cannot be settled [STRIKE]on[/STRIKE] by tomorrow (the said handover date), [STRIKE]probably extra rent shall be paid for another extension period[/STRIKE], you will be liable to pay additional rent for the extended period. Thank you.
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emsr2d2

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... a one-week grace period ...
 

Rover_KE

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I like how [STRIKE]the prelast user[/STRIKE] tedmc edited your work. Have a look at his/her remarks and you will see that [STRIKE]the weakest side of yours is the part about prepositions[/STRIKE] one of your weaknesses is the use of prepositions.

'Prelast' is not an English word.
 
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