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    Thumbs up Correct My conversation

    Here I am writing a conversation between a two people. Some one please correct the errors from this conversation.

    Sir: Good morning, Take your seat.
    Me: Happy morning sir.
    Sir: Tell me about yourself.
    Me: I am Siva, completed B.E. now pursuing MBA.
    Sir: why would you like to work in our company?
    Me: sir, since your company is a famous, Its my pleasure to work in your company.
    Sir: Can you say your long time goal?
    Me: yes t want to be a millionaire with in 5 or less year.
    Sir: so what's your current goals?
    Me: my current goal is to speak English fluently.
    Sir: You are appointed, So when are you going to join?
    Me: Thank you somuch sir. I will join immediately.

    Someone please correct and give suggestion to improve my English .

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    Re: Correct My conversation

    Quote Originally Posted by Shiva06 View Post
    Here, I am writing a conversation between two people. Can someone please correct the errors from in this conversation?

    Sir: Good morning; Take your have a seat.
    Me: Happy Good morning (sir).
    Sir: Tell me about yourself.
    Me: I am My name is Siva; I've completed my B.E., and now pursuing I'm doing an MBA.
    Sir: Why would you like to work in our company?
    Me: sir, since your company CandySoft is a highly renowned company and a leader in the XYZ industry. famous, Its my pleasure It would be an honour for me to work in your company.
    Sir: Can you say tell me about your long-term time goals?
    Me: Yes, t want to be a successful and highly skilled professional in my field. millionaire within 5 or less year.
    Sir: so what's And how about your current goals?
    Me: My current goal is to be able to speak English fluently.
    Sir: You are hired; appointed, so when can you start? are you going to join?
    Me: Thank you so much, sir. I will join can start immediately.

    Can someone please correct that conversation and give me suggestions on how to improve my English?
    Welcome to the forum, Shiva.
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 13-Oct-2016 at 21:19. Reason: Fixed typo

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