[General] Correct My conversation

[Shiva06]

Here I am writing a conversation between a two people. Some one please correct the errors from this conversation.

Sir: Good morning, Take your seat.
Me: Happy morning sir.
Sir: Tell me about yourself.
Me: I am Siva, completed B.E. now pursuing MBA.
Sir: why would you like to work in our company?
Me: sir, since your company is a famous, Its my pleasure to work in your company.
Sir: Can you say your long time goal?
Me: yes t want to be a millionaire with in 5 or less year.
Sir: so what's your current goals?
Me: my current goal is to speak English fluently.
Sir: You are appointed, So when are you going to join?
Me: Thank you somuch sir. I will join immediately.

Someone please correct and give suggestion to improve my English .

 

[teechar]

Here, I am writing a conversation between two people. Can someone please correct the errors [STRIKE]from[/STRIKE] in this conversation?

Sir: Good morning; [STRIKE]Take your[/STRIKE] have a seat.
Me: [STRIKE]Happy[/STRIKE] Good morning (sir).
Sir: Tell me about yourself.
Me: [STRIKE]I am[/STRIKE] My name is Siva; I've completed my B.E., and now [STRIKE]pursuing[/STRIKE] I'm doing an MBA.
Sir: Why would you like to work in our company?
Me: [STRIKE]sir, since your company[/STRIKE] CandySoft is a highly renowned company and a leader in the XYZ industry. [STRIKE]famous, Its my pleasure[/STRIKE] It would be an honour for me to work in your company.
Sir: Can you [STRIKE]say[/STRIKE] tell me about your long-term [STRIKE]time[/STRIKE] goals?
Me: Yes, t want to be a successful and highly skilled professional in my field. [STRIKE]millionaire within 5 or less year.[/STRIKE]
Sir: [STRIKE]so what's[/STRIKE] And how about your current goals?
Me: My current goal is to be able to speak English fluently.
Sir: You are hired; [STRIKE]appointed,[/STRIKE] so when can you start? [STRIKE]are you going to join?[/STRIKE]
Me: Thank you so much, sir. I [STRIKE]will join[/STRIKE] can start immediately.

Can someone please correct that conversation and give me suggestions on how to improve my English?

Welcome to the forum, Shiva.