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    please correct my text

    This is a comment of mine that I'd like to write in a discussion on facebook. Please correct it, because I'm not quite sure, maybe there are some grammatical mistakes.
    "All these so-called Royals, and I don't care if they're British or Dutch or Belgian, they're all blood-sucking parasites. Monarchy has nothing to do with democracy, because in a democracy, all people have the same rights by birth and no one should have any special rights. I really can't understand why y'all Brits or Dutch or whatever don't wipe them all away and sue them for oppressing your peoples for so many centuries just like the French did during their French Revolution."
    Last edited by krisfromgermany; 14-Oct-2016 at 23:42.

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