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    The multy story banquet hall.

    A banquet hall is a place where marriages and parties are hosted or organised. In a multy story banquet hall more than one marriage function can be organised at once. If two marriages take place at the same time then they arrange for food on ground floor hall for first party and on first floor for second party. They also provide different entry and exit gates for the people. Like a lot of people come to attend different parties (first party or second party). People who want to attend first party they will have to use a different gate whereas a person who wants to attend second party then that person will use a different gate.

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    Re: The multy story banquet hall.

    Why don't you start? You could start with multy.

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    Re: The multy story banquet hall.

    Quote Originally Posted by Tdol View Post
    Why don't you start? You could start with multy.
    Sorry I didn't get it. What do you mean by this?

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    Re: The multy story banquet hall.

    Tdol meant that it would be a good start if you checked your own piece before we do. You have used "multy" - this does not exist in English.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: The multy story banquet hall.

    A banquet hall is a place where marriages and parties are hosted or organised. In a multi story banquet hall more than one marriage function can be organised at once. If two marriages take place at the same time then they arrange for food on ground floor hall for first party and on first floor for second party. They also provide different entry and exit gates for the people. Like a lot of people come to attend different parties (first party or second party). People who want to attend first party they will have to use a different gate whereas a person who wants to attend second party they will use a different gate.

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    Re: The multy story banquet hall.

    Quote Originally Posted by tufguy View Post
    A banquet hall is a place where marriages wedding receptions and other parties are held. hosted or organised. In a multistory banquet hall, more than one marriage function can be organised held at the same time. once. If two marriages take place at the same time then they arrange for food on ground floor hall for first party and on first floor for second party. They also provide typically have different entry and exit gates doors for the guests. people. Like a lot of people come to attend different parties (first party or second party).
    People who want to attend first party they will have to use a different gate whereas a person who wants to attend second party they will use a different gate.
    I don't understand the text highlighted in green.
    The text highlighted in blue is repetitive and unnecessary.

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    Re: The multy story banquet hall.

    Quote Originally Posted by tufguy View Post
    Sorry I didn't get it. What do you mean by this?
    Multi - not multy might be a good start.
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 03-Nov-2016 at 14:31. Reason: Fixed typo

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    Re: The multy story banquet hall.

    Quote Originally Posted by teechar View Post
    I don't understand the text highlighted in green.
    The text highlighted in blue is repetitive and unnecessary.
    I meant that these banquet halls can host (I don't know whether to use host or hold here) more than one wedding reception at once (like one on the ground floor and one on the first floor). Guests can get confused between two receptions and can enter the wrong reception.

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    Re: The multy story banquet hall.

    You said that the two have separate entrances and exits. Isn't that to ensure that the guests don't get confused?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: The multy story banquet hall.

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    You said that the two have separate entrances and exits. Isn't that to ensure that the guests don't get confused?
    Yes, but still some people get confused and enter the wrong reception.

    Are my sentences correct?

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