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    How to write a key moment in a story when the author created suspense.

    I want to know where the author created suspense and how?
    My question--
    Choose a key moment in a story when the author created suspense was created?
    Take for example the book Wonder by R.J Palacio

    Thanks so much !
    i await your kind response

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    Re: How to write a key moment in a story when the author created suspense.

    Welcome to the forum, Janet.

    Sorry — we don't do students' homework.

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    Re: How to write a key moment in a story when the author created suspense.

    Quote Originally Posted by Janet2016 View Post
    I want to know where the author created suspense and how.
    My question:
    Choose a key moment in a story when the author created suspense was created? (The underlined part is not grammatical.)
    Take, for example, the book "Wonder" by R.J. Palacio.

    Thanks so much!
    I await your kind response.
    As you now know, we don't help with homework or assignments. However, I have corrected your post above. Remember to follow these rules of written English at all times:

    - Start every sentence with a capital letter.
    - End every sentence with one, appropriate punctuation mark.
    - Always capitalise the word "I" (first person singular).
    - Do not put a space before a comma, full stop, question mark or exclamation mark.
    - Always put a space after a comma, full stop, question mark or exclamation mark.

    With the titles of books, you can either enclose them in quotation marks (as I did) or write them in italics​.
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 05-Nov-2016 at 15:49. Reason: Fixed punctuation correction
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: How to write a key moment in a story when the author created suspense.

    The first sentence in the OP is not a question. It should end with a period (full stop).
    I am not a teacher.

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