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    To live by God's grace

    Hi :)

    "He who is loved
    He who is praised
    He has shown the way
    To live by God's grace

    Is this correct?
    Thank you.

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    Re: To live by God's grace

    The text is OK as free verse, where rules of grammar don't apply. If it's meant to be a rhyming poem, it doesn't work because the final syllables of the second and fourth lines don't rhyme.
    I am not a teacher.

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    Re: To live by God's grace

    Quote Originally Posted by GoesStation View Post
    The text is OK as free verse, where rules of grammar don't apply. If it's meant to be a rhyming poem, it doesn't work because the final syllables of the second and fourth lines don't rhyme.
    Thank you for the tips, I appreciate it :)

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    Re: To live by God's grace

    Please don't use homemade emoticons. If you really need to use one, click on the icon in the toolbar (at the moment, due to an issue with the system, you might have to click on "Go Advanced" first) and choose the appropriate one.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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