dkja
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- Nov 7, 2016
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- Native Language
- Hindi
- Home Country
- India
- Current Location
- India
Hi,
I would like to add the following sentences on my resume for interviewer to really get my resume noticed (I feel so), but I am not happy :-( with its overall formation and structure.
Can you guys help restructure the following sentence(s) while preserving the meaning so it gives a better impression ??
WORK PHILOSOPHY: I strive to manifest company's values, branding style, product & services, into company’s website, that aims to create the impression that client's wants in their visitors mind.
As a result of efforts, clients saw their tremendous business and income boost, giving them many fold ROI and transformed them into brands in their resp.
Guys, any help is appreciated. :up:
thanks
dk
I would like to add the following sentences on my resume for interviewer to really get my resume noticed (I feel so), but I am not happy :-( with its overall formation and structure.
Can you guys help restructure the following sentence(s) while preserving the meaning so it gives a better impression ??
WORK PHILOSOPHY: I strive to manifest company's values, branding style, product & services, into company’s website, that aims to create the impression that client's wants in their visitors mind.
As a result of efforts, clients saw their tremendous business and income boost, giving them many fold ROI and transformed them into brands in their resp.
Guys, any help is appreciated. :up:
thanks
dk
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