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    Hi,

    I'm working on my new website and I don't want to make mistakes in English. Could you correct the text below?

    Tourists can visit the “Air France Point” (Ponta da Air France in Portuguese), located at the meeting point between the inner and outer see. It is so-called because in the early 20s the French installed the first radio connection to relief the first aviators who crossed the South atlantic, from São Luis in Senegal to Natal in Brazil.
    It’s an ideal place for hiking, taking pictures and contemplating the big waves.

    Inner see in Portuguses is "mar interior" It means the part of the see between the island and the continent.
    Outer see is in the opposite side between the island and the african coast much farther.

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    Re: Need correction

    Quote Originally Posted by bieasy View Post

    Tourists can visit the “Air France Point” (Ponta da Air France in Portuguese), located at the meeting point between of the inner and outer seas see. It is so called because in the early 1920s, the French installed the first radio connection transmitter to relief relieve the first aviators who crossed the South Atlantic, from São Luis in Senegal to Natal in Brazil.
    It’s an ideal place for hiking, taking pictures and contemplating the big waves.
    Inner see sea in Portuguese is "mar interior" It means the part of the see sea between the island and the continent.
    The outer see sea is in on the opposite side, between the island and the African coast much farther.
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