Nikitus
Senior Member
- Joined
- Oct 4, 2013
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Spanish
- Home Country
- Chile
- Current Location
- Chile
Hello.
Are the following paragraphs grammatically correct? Thanks,
Kevin was wearing his wooden amulet, red shirt, blue shorts, socks and sandals. He was painting a rusty street fire hydrant, on a busy street, that was near a local who offered that sold burgers, fries and drinks.
After Kevin spilled paint unconsciously and this formed a strange figure, a new memory appears spontaneous triggered by his mind, taking him to the time when he was eight years old.
-“Stop playing, we are in class!!”, said teacher Simonsen.
-“Sorry professor Simonsen…”, Kevin said.
Kevin tried to continuing painting, taking the brush and spreading it into the paint. But another memory appeared from his mind, taking him this time, to period when he was sixteen.
He was in his house, talking with his friend Mark about life, loves and projects of life.
Are the following paragraphs grammatically correct? Thanks,
Kevin was wearing his wooden amulet, red shirt, blue shorts, socks and sandals. He was painting a rusty street fire hydrant, on a busy street, that was near a local who offered that sold burgers, fries and drinks.
After Kevin spilled paint unconsciously and this formed a strange figure, a new memory appears spontaneous triggered by his mind, taking him to the time when he was eight years old.
-“Stop playing, we are in class!!”, said teacher Simonsen.
-“Sorry professor Simonsen…”, Kevin said.
Kevin tried to continuing painting, taking the brush and spreading it into the paint. But another memory appeared from his mind, taking him this time, to period when he was sixteen.
He was in his house, talking with his friend Mark about life, loves and projects of life.