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    Question Grammar help:tenses,verbs

    Please correct the tenses,verbs mistakes

    I'm in the episode where they are going to execute him.

    I wish somehow he can be saved don't want to see him die.
    But, I have a feeling,
    Nancy won't let this happen She will try to make it look like he was executed
    and fool others. But, saves him secretly So, he can have the throne one day

    Nancy is the best! nothing can compare to his kindness, cuteness and madness
    james could have been the president, I would have been happy to see that


    Thankyou so much teachers
    Last edited by power1; 13-Nov-2016 at 21:24.

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    Re: Grammer help:tenses,verbs

    Quote Originally Posted by power1 View Post
    Please correct the tenses,verbs mistakes Errors in spacing around punctuation and missing punctuation.

    I'm in the episode where they are going to execute him.

    I wish somehow he can be saved don't want to see him die. There is either some punctuation or some words missing between "saved" and "don't".
    But, I have a feeling, Incorrect use of commas and unnecessary line break
    Nancy won't let this happen Missing punctuation She will try to make it look like he was executed
    and fool others. But, saves him secretly So, he can have the throne one day Unnecessary commas and missing punctuation.

    Nancy is the best! nothing can compare to his kindness, cuteness and madness Lack of capitalisation and punctuation.
    james could have been the president, I would have been happy to see that Lack of capitalisation and punctuation.


    Thankyou so much teachers "Thankyou" is not a word. Missing punctuation.
    You have misspelt "grammar" in your title.
    There are multiple errors in each line of your piece. I have noted them above. Please fix those errors and rewrite your post.
    Also, Nancy is a female name so "his kindness" is incorrect.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Grammer help:tenses,verbs

    Thankyou so much Teacher for correcting my mistakes! I'm still learning and my english sucks :(
    Last edited by power1; 12-Nov-2016 at 15:25.

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    Re: Grammer help:tenses,verbs

    Please don't address forum members as "sir". It excludes the female members.
    I am not a teacher.

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    Re: Grammer help:tenses,verbs

    Would you please correct my mistakes on tenses,verbs now? :) @emsr2d2
    Last edited by power1; 12-Nov-2016 at 15:37.

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    Re: Grammer help:tenses,verbs

    Not yet. I asked you to rewrite your post, fixing all the errors I pointed out. You haven't done that yet.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Grammer help:tenses,verbs

    Please check if they are correct or not now.

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    Re: Grammer help:tenses,verbs

    Please don't edit posts after they receive responses. It makes a nonsense of the rest of your thread. I wanted you to write your post again, as a new post, fixing all the errors.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Grammer help:tenses,verbs

    Please correct the tense and verb mistakes.



    I'm in the episode where they are going to execute him.

    I wish somehow he can be saved, I don't want to see him die.

    But, I have a feeling Nancy won't let this happen, She will try to make it look like he was executed
    and fool others But saves him secretly So he can have the throne one day.

    Nancy is the best! Nothing can compare to her kindness, cuteness and madness.


    James could have been the president, I would have been happy to see that.


    Thankyou! teachers.

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