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    Lightbulb Grammar and vocabulary check

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    Last edited by Arsalan.habib; 17-Nov-2016 at 16:17.

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    Re: Grammer and vocabulary check

    Please edit your title to correct the spelling of "gramma​r".

    You must capitalise "I" every time you write/type it. We "make" mistakes, not "do" them. It should be "enlighten" (bare infinitive) not "enlightened" (past tense).

    You really need to look at your choice of tenses throughout. You have frequently used the present perfect of past perfect when the past simple would have sufficed.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #3

    Re: Grammer and vocabulary check

    Fair enough. Can you please highlight the incorrect grammar used.

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    Re: Grammar and vocabulary check

    I agree with emsr2d2's comment about your use of tense. I suggest you edit your post to fix that and to make your text simpler and easier to read. Cut out as much waffle as you can.

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