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    please correct this letter

    As a manager, I want to give a warning letter to the supervisor for verbal altercation with two of his subordinates in outside of the working place and he issued warning letter to them by overtaking me-PLEASE SEE BELOW

    This letter is to convince you about the importance of follow established company protocol. You had been involved in a verbal altercation with two of you subordinates outside of the gym. In the course of argument, you have touched the body of the staff. “Touching the body of a person is a form of invasion”, which is not suitable for a responsible supervisor. If you have found any mistake from your subordinate, call them into the office and shout if required, not in outside among the public. And also, you have presented this matter to me without giving any respect to the management which is unprofessional.

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    Re: please correct this letter

    Quote Originally Posted by sanjfer View Post
    As a manager, I want to give a warning letter to the supervisor for a verbal altercation with two of his subordinates in outside of the workplace and because he went over my head and issued warning letters to them. by overtaking me-PLEASE SEE BELOW

    This letter is to convince you about I wish to draw to your attention the importance of following established company protocol. You had been were involved in a verbal altercation with two of your subordinates outside of the gym. In the course of the argument, you have touched the body of made physical contact with the staff members concerned. “Touching the body of a person is a form of invasion”, which is not suitable acceptable for a responsible supervisor. If you have found any mistake from your an issue with a subordinate, call them into the office and shout reprimand them verbally if required. , not in outside among the public. And also, you have presented this matter to me without giving any respect to the management which is unprofessional.
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