mektok
Junior Member
- Joined
- Jul 30, 2007
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Malay
- Home Country
- Malaysia
- Current Location
- Malaysia
Hi to all lovely teachers!
I have few sentences for your kind attention. I've corrected them according to my limited knowledge of English grammar.
1. Since the study involved future health care providers, two higher learning institutions which represent both public and private universities were selected from this area based on the medical and health sciences courses that were offered in those institutions.
2. (My version) Since the aim of the study was to involve future health care providers, two higher learning institutions representing both public and private universities were selected from this area based on the medical and health sciences courses that were offered in those institutions.
3. Most of these students lacked awareness of their future consequences and majority of them had unprotected sex with multiple partners.
4. (My version) Most of these students lacked the awareness of their future consequences and majority of them had unprotected sex with multiple partners.
I look forward to receiving a positive response from all of you!
kind regards,
mektok;-)
I have few sentences for your kind attention. I've corrected them according to my limited knowledge of English grammar.
1. Since the study involved future health care providers, two higher learning institutions which represent both public and private universities were selected from this area based on the medical and health sciences courses that were offered in those institutions.
2. (My version) Since the aim of the study was to involve future health care providers, two higher learning institutions representing both public and private universities were selected from this area based on the medical and health sciences courses that were offered in those institutions.
3. Most of these students lacked awareness of their future consequences and majority of them had unprotected sex with multiple partners.
4. (My version) Most of these students lacked the awareness of their future consequences and majority of them had unprotected sex with multiple partners.
I look forward to receiving a positive response from all of you!
kind regards,
mektok;-)
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