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    Since the aim of the study was to involve future health care providers

    Hi to all lovely teachers!
    I have few sentences for your kind attention. I've corrected them according to my limited knowledge of English grammar.

    1. Since the study involved future health care providers, two higher learning institutions which represent both public and private universities were selected from this area based on the medical and health sciences courses that were offered in those institutions.

    2. (My version) Since the aim of the study was to involve future health care providers, two higher learning institutions representing both public and private universities were selected from this area based on the medical and health sciences courses that were offered in those institutions.

    3. Most of these students lacked awareness of their future consequences and majority of them had unprotected sex with multiple partners.
    4. (My version) Most of these students lacked the awareness of their future consequences and majority of them had unprotected sex with multiple partners.

    I look forward to receiving a positive response from all of you!

    kind regards,

    mektok

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    Re: Since the aim of the study was to involve future health care providers

    Duplicate post
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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