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    Please correct grammar and punctuation

    Good day Colleagues,

    ICT is in the process of implementing self-service password reset and unlock for all users. This is done to enhance security and to ensure accurate record keeping. Furthermore, it will reduce the amount of time and effort required for the process. Essentially when the functionality has been enabled, users will no longer be required to complete a form when they need their Windows password to be rest or unlocked. Please note that this service will only for Windows operating systems, for other applications the process will remain the same.

    To initiate the process starting from Friday the 25th of November 2016, ICT personnel will visit each user at their workstation to assist with activating the functionality. Attached is a how to guide for future reference. Please print it out and have it available for days you may need to reset or unlock your account password.


    Regards,

    IT Support
    Last edited by ManV; 24-Nov-2016 at 10:24. Reason: Enlarged font to make post readable

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    Re: Please correct grammar and punctuation

    Quote Originally Posted by ManV View Post
    Good day Colleagues,

    ICT is in the process of implementing self-servicepassword reset and unlock for all users. This is done to enhance security andto ensure accurate record keeping. Furthermore, it will reduce the amount of timeand effort required for the process. Essentially when the functionality has been enabled, users will no longer be required tocomplete a form when they need their Windows password to be rest or unlocked. Pleasenote that this service will only for Windows operating systems, for other applicationsthe process will remain the same.

    To initiate the processstarting from Friday the 25th of November 2016, ICT personnel will visiteach user at their workstation to assist with activating the functionality. Attachedis a how to guide for future reference. Pleaseprint it out and have it available for days you may need to reset or unlockyour account password.

    Regards,

    IT Support
    See above. There are a lot of missing spaces in your post. Please use the "Edit Post" function to insert those spaces.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Please correct grammar and punctuation

    Thanks I have made the corrections. Please proceed with proofreading.

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    Re: Please correct grammar and punctuation

    Is there such a thing as "unlocking a password"?
    Or do you mean "unlocking an account"?
    I am not a teacher.

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    Re: Please correct grammar and punctuation

    Quote Originally Posted by ManV View Post
    Good day morning/afternoon/evening, colleagues.

    ICT is in the process of implementing self-service password reset and unlock for all users. This is done to enhance security and to ensure accurate record-keeping. Furthermore, it will reduce the amount of time and effort required for the process. Essentially, when the functionality has been enabled, users will no longer be required to complete a form when they need their Windows password to be reset or unlocked. Please note that this service will work only for Windows operating systems; for other applications the process will remain the same.

    To initiate the process, starting from Friday, the 25th of November 2016, ICT personnel will visit each user at their workstation to assist with activating the functionality. Attached is a "how to" guide for future reference. Please print it out and have it available for days you may need to reset or unlock your account password.


    Regards,

    IT Support
    See my suggested changes above.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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