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    Kevin listened carefully the details of his last offering

    Hello

    Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

    "Kevin listened carefully the details of his last offering from the ghost. A few seconds later, he dressed quickly and went to the Bennett theatre."

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    Re: Kevin listened carefully the details of his last offering

    Who does "his" refer to?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Kevin listened carefully the details of his last offering

    Dear emsr2d2:

    First of all, thanks for your answer

    The "his" refer to the offering that Kevin made in the past.

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    Re: Kevin listened carefully the details of his last offering

    Kevin has to listen to something.
    I am not a teacher.

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    Re: Kevin listened carefully the details of his last offering

    Did Kevin make an offering to the ghost in the past? If so, why is he now listening to that offer from the ghost?

    I'm not even sure what you mean by "made an offering". That phrase brings to mind a sort of ritual where people offer things, usually to gods or similar, as a sort of present or even a sacrifice, in order to get something they want or in order to appease the god.
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    Re: Kevin listened carefully the details of his last offering

    Dear emsr2d2:

    Yes, Kevin made a offering in the past, to a ghost, but he offered a thing to be in peace with the ghost.

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    Re: Kevin listened carefully the details of his last offering

    So now we have established that Kevin has already made the offering, why does he need to listen to the ghost telling him the details of the offering? Kevin already knows the details because he made the offering.
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