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    #11

    Re: Please Review my Motivation Letter

    Remember:

    medicinal herbs

    And:

    for their families

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    #12

    Re: Please Review my Motivation Letter

    You need to rewrite the next sentence. What do you want to say?

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    #13

    Re: Please Review my Motivation Letter

    The next sentence is actually not a sentence. Perhaps:

    Medicinal herbs have been used for centuries, and that is because they work.

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    I want to do the research on medicinal herbs that will help us understand them better and make them more available in modern medical practice.

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    #14

    Re: Please Review my Motivation Letter

    Say:

    My home country needs new ideas and it needs young medical professionals, and I want to be one of them.

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    #15

    Traditional Medicine and Modern Medicine -- a Partnership

    The current title does not help me remember this thread.

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    #16

    Re: Please Review my Motivation Letter

    Quote Originally Posted by Tarheel View Post
    Please rewrite that really long sentence as three or four shorter sentences.
    which sentences do you mean?

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    #17

    Re: Please Review my Motivation Letter

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    What do you mean by "the concentration of natural product"? Medicinal herbs?
    yeah I mean that

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    #18

    Re: Please Review my Motivation Letter

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    Be patient. Tarheel tends to make corrections one sentence at a time. I'm certain there will be more responses from him.
    Yes okay

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    #19

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tarheel View Post
    By "since my bachelor" do you mean since you earned your bachelor's degree?

    What do you mean by "pharmacy concentration in natural product"?

    (i had a post that disappeared which I am going to have to replace with three or four shorter ones.)

    No, I mean during my bachelor study, is the grammar's right?

    Well, it's like a specialization in herbal medicine

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    #20

    Re: Please Review my Motivation Letter

    Quote Originally Posted by Tarheel View Post
    I don't know what you mean by "taking a speaker". Did you give talks to the villagers?
    like becoming a speaker? I gave presentation to the villagers at that time

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