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    #1

    ... shape our lives for the best ...

    I derive satisfaction from understanding troubling questions about human life and help shape our lives for the best to make this world a better place. My goal is to continue carrying out the clinical psychology research to develop theories in this field and discover new facts to apply them to real-world situations.


    Would you help correct that content?

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    #2

    Re: ... shape our lives for the best ...

    I would rewrite the first sentence to make it two sentences.

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    #3

    Re: ... shape our lives for the best ...

    Is that research something you have been doing, or was it started by somebody else?

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    Re: ... shape our lives for the best ...

    Two sentences:

    I derive satisfaction from understanding troubling questions about human life. And I would love to shape our lives for the best to make this world a better place.

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    Re: ... shape our lives for the best ...

    That research something started by the applicant himself. Not me. We Arab students write first in Arabic, and then translate into English.

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    Re: ... shape our lives for the best ...

    Would you recommend that I post the other sections of CV here?

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    #7

    Re: ... shape our lives for the best ...

    Quote Originally Posted by Odessa Dawn View Post
    Two sentences:

    I derive satisfaction from understanding troubling questions about human life. And I would love to shape our lives for the best to make this world a better place.
    It"s much clearer that way. Better!

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    Re: ... shape our lives for the best ...

    Quote Originally Posted by Odessa Dawn View Post
    That research something started by the applicant himself. Not me. We Arab students write first in Arabic, and then translate into English.
    So it's not for you?

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    #9

    Re: ... shape our lives for the best ...

    Quote Originally Posted by Odessa Dawn View Post
    Would you recommend that I post the other sections of *the* CV here?
    If you have posted part of it here, you might as well post the rest of it here.

    (Please note that I am not a moderator.)

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    #10

    Re: ... shape our lives for the best ...

    Perhaps:

    My goal is to continue carrying out the clinical psychology research to develop theories in this field.

    It would, I think, be a good idea to point out who is doing the research and what it is about. (At some point I will want to delete "carrying out".)

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