dandandewo
New member
- Joined
- Dec 1, 2016
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- China
- Current Location
- Austria
Dear teachers,
I am a Chinese. I just come to Australia and can not communicate with local very well. So I decide to practice English. I have written a short dialogue. Can you help me correct it ?
Ask my deskmate about his day:
A: Hi, Lina. How's your weekend? Did you go to some special places or ate some delicious food?
B:Yes. I went to the 1000 steps track, which is in the southwest of Dandenong Ranges National Park.
A:Oh, there are many trees, aren't there?
B:Yes, the trees are tall, but the mountains aren't high. I think the height is good for climbing. The air above the hill is very fresh. Maybe you will like it.
A:I think so, and I decide to climb the 1000 steps track in a few days.
B:You won't be disappointed.
I am a Chinese. I just come to Australia and can not communicate with local very well. So I decide to practice English. I have written a short dialogue. Can you help me correct it ?
Ask my deskmate about his day:
A: Hi, Lina. How's your weekend? Did you go to some special places or ate some delicious food?
B:Yes. I went to the 1000 steps track, which is in the southwest of Dandenong Ranges National Park.
A:Oh, there are many trees, aren't there?
B:Yes, the trees are tall, but the mountains aren't high. I think the height is good for climbing. The air above the hill is very fresh. Maybe you will like it.
A:I think so, and I decide to climb the 1000 steps track in a few days.
B:You won't be disappointed.