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    Fixated on appearances

    I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural. Would you please correct my mistakes?

    In the last decades, Western world has been fixated on appearances, which is causing anxiety in many young people who feel they are not beautiful enough.

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    Re: Fixated on appearances

    Change "In" to "For" at the start.
    You need a specific number or "a few" before "decades".
    You need "the" before "Western world".
    Remove "been".
    Removed "which is".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Fixated on appearances

    I am wondering if my sentence would be correct if I use "over" at the start.

    Over the last few decades, the Western world has fixated on appearances, causing anxiety in many young people who feel they are not beautiful enough.

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    Re: Fixated on appearances

    That works for me.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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