Bassim
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- Joined
- Mar 1, 2008
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Bosnian
- Home Country
- Bosnia Herzegovina
- Current Location
- Sweden
Would you please take a look at my sentences from my short story and tell me if they sound natural. I am wondering about my second sentence. Is it correct as it is or should I add "while keeping." "I could do that while keeping my eyes closed."
After a few failed tries, I had learnt to take apart my AK-47 and reassemble it, skilfully and quickly. Later, I could do that with my eyes closed.
After a few failed tries, I had learnt to take apart my AK-47 and reassemble it, skilfully and quickly. Later, I could do that with my eyes closed.