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    Suddenly Kelly was in front of Kevin

    Hello.

    Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

    "Suddenly Kelly was in front of Kevin. He felt a little dizzy and began to hallucinate. He started to saw Kelly, when she was young. This memory when they were young began to mix with reality. Her face started to get older and after a few seconds Kevin saw Kelly in the present time, as an adult woman."

    Thanks,

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    Re: Suddenly Kelly was in front of Kevin

    Quote Originally Posted by Nikitus View Post
    Hello.

    Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

    "Suddenly Kelly was in front of Kevin. He felt a little dizzy and began to hallucinate. He started to saw see Kelly (no comma here) as she was when she was young. This memory of/from when they were young began to mix with reality. Her face started to get older and after a few seconds Kevin saw Kelly in the present time, as an adult woman."

    Thanks.
    See above.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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