When demand grows while supply is low we interfere in the market

[majid72]

Hello

Would you please check the following text?

When demand for beef starts to grow while supply is low we enter/interfere in the market and embark on importing beef for the market regulation.

Thank you

 

[tedmc]

Hello

Would you please check the following text?

When the demand for beef starts to [STRIKE]grow[/STRIKE] rise/increase while the supply is low, we enter[STRIKE]/interfere in[/STRIKE] the market [STRIKE][STRIKE]and embark on[/STRIKE][/STRIKE] by importing beef for the market regulation(?).

Thank you

I do not understand the phrase underlined. "Embark on" needs an object.

 

[majid72]

I do not understand the phrase underlined.

Market regulation means "control of the market in terms of price and striking a balance between demand and supply". Please tell me if the phrase is incorrect.

 

[tedmc]

When the demand for beef starts to [STRIKE]grow[/STRIKE] rise/increase while the supply is low, we enter[STRIKE]/interfere in[/STRIKE] the market [STRIKE]and embark on[/STRIKE] by importing beef to keep prices under control/to keep prices in check/to stabilize prices.

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[Raymott]

I don't have trouble with the first part, in business talk.

"When demand for beef starts to grow while supply is low, we intervene/intercede in the market by importing beef to stabilize prices."

 

[majid72]

You can find definition for market regulation in the below link:
https://www.google.com/search?q=mar...on&aqs=chrome..69i57&sourceid=chrome&ie=UTF-8

Do you find the usage of the phrase in the origin incorrect?

 

[tedmc]

You can find definition for market regulation in the below link:
https://www.google.com/search?q=mar...on&aqs=chrome..69i57&sourceid=chrome&ie=UTF-8

"Regulation" in "market regulation" tends to be ambiguous in the context as it implies the other meaning of regulation, which is about rules, even though it refers to the controlling of prices.

 

[Raymott]

"Market regulation" is not necessarily wrong. But the sentence, "We regulate the market for market regulation" is. "We intervene in the market for market regulation" is also bad writing, because intervening in the market is market regulation.

 

[Rover_KE]

You can find definition for market regulation in the below link:
https://www.google.com/search?q=mar...on&aqs=chrome..69i57&sourceid=chrome&ie=UTF-8

Please give the context in post #1 every time you post — not #6.