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  1. Just Joined
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      • Native Language:
      • Russian
      • Home Country:
      • Ukraine
      • Current Location:
      • Ukraine

    • Join Date: Dec 2016
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    #1

    Post Please help me with editing of introduction letter

    Dear Friends,

    Please help me with editing of the presentation letter (in English). Would be glad to hear any advise according to your oppinion
    "So who we are.


    JustBe company was found in Ukraine (Kharkov) in 2016. The main aim of the company is to assist foreign business to grow in Ukraine. We are searching for the foreign clients and provide them with the full range of services (legal, marketing, hr and supporting services) to start/develop theirs business in Ukraine.


    In our company team we have put together young but talented specialists from the necessary fields of the business activity. In the meantime we are able to provide all of our services without engagement of the hosted services.


    In layman's terms our company is your solid comrade in Ukraine.


    In case you or your company is interested in doing business in Ukraine you may contact us and provide us with the details of your commercial activity (the field of your business, your business plans etc). After analyzing of your information we will prepare the preliminary due diligence according to the Ukrainian legislation terms and condition of the Ukrainian market. In case you’ll be satisfied as to the Ukrainian legal terms and condition of the Ukrainian market we will jump to the next stage of implementation of your business in Ukraine. According to the necessity we may provide you with the services: searching of possible business partners and clients, prepare and support your business meeting in Ukraine, HR and IT services etc.


    Our main peculiarity is that every clients case is individual for us. We do not have set tariffs for our services. The rate for our services will be established on the basis of a full analysis of clients task. So contact us and provide with the information as to your task and we will prepare the recommended services and costs for solving of your task. Also we would like to notice that the preliminary analyzing and consulting as to the case are free of charge!


    We believe that our company will help you to do business in Ukraine.

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  2. Moderator
    Retired English Teacher
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      • English
      • Home Country:
      • England
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      • England

    • Join Date: Jun 2010
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    #2

    Re: Please help me with editing of introduction letter

    I'd say you need to hire (and pay) a professional service to translate your native-language promotional material into a variety of European languages.

  3. teechar's Avatar
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    English Teacher
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      • Home Country:
      • Iraq
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      • Iraq

    • Join Date: Feb 2015
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    #3

    Re: Please help me with editing of introduction letter

    JustBe was founded in Kharkov, Ukraine in 2016. The main aim of the company is to assist foreign business to grow in Ukraine. We work with foreign clients and provide them with the full range of services (legal, marketing, HR and administrative support services) to establish/develop their business operations in Ukraine.

    Our team includes young but talented specialists from a variety of business fields. That enables us to provide all of our services efficiently and without any unnecessary delay. In layman's terms, our company is your solid business partner in Ukraine.

    In case you or your company is interested in doing business in Ukraine, you may contact us and discuss with us your particular commercial needs and requirements. After analyzing your details, we will prepare the preliminary due diligence according to statutory Ukrainian legislation and the state of the Ukrainian market. If you are satisfied and wish to proceed, we will move to the next stage of implementation of your business in Ukraine. According to your requirements, we can offer you various services such as helping you search for suitable business partners and clients, organizing your business meetings in Ukraine, HR and IT services, etc.

    We firmly believe that every client case is individual for us. We do not have set tariffs for our services. The rate for our services will be determined on the basis of a full analysis of a client's situation. So contact us and provide us with the relevant information, and we will prepare the recommended services and costs for you. However, please note that our preliminary analysis and consultation are free of charge.

    We believe that our company will help you to succeed in doing business in Ukraine.

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