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    correction

    Hi,
    I write quite important thesis for school, I would like to ask for correction to the headline ​"Rehabilitation of Patients after Complications with Total Joint Replacement of the Lower Limbs" , other version could be "Rehabilitation of Patients after Total Joint Replacement Complications of the Lower Limbs" should there be - OF THE lower limbs or ON (the) lower extremity (want to write mainly about hip and knee, complications as infection or dislocations) or could I use "Rehabilitation of Patients with Complications after Lower Extremities Total Joint Replacements" ? (I am not native english speeker) Thank you, Vaclav Jezek

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    Re: correction

    "Rehabilitation of Patients with Complications after Total Joint Replacements of the Lower Limbs" sounds clearer to me.

    Please note the following:
    - You should use period/full-stop instead of commas to separate sentences. You have written the whole paragraph in one sentence and put everything, in one paragraph.
    - The above is a title, not a headline.
    - "English" is spelt with a capital letter.
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    I am not a teacher.

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    Re: correction

    How about this title "Rehabilitation of Patients with Total Joint Replacement of the Lower Limbs"

    Not a teacher

    Last edited by teechar; 09-Dec-2016 at 15:56. Reason: added "not a teacher" and removed unnecessary formatting

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