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    #1

    Photography Business Letter US-English

    Hi Smith,

    ABC Real Estate Photo & Video as Napaís leading studio in luxury real estate marketing, offers
    following exclusive services to top real estate agents.

    - Professional Editorial HD photography
    - Cinematic Full-HD Video
    - Feature Sheets
    - Aerial Drone photo/video
    - Listing Website /Media Gallery
    - Agentís website
    - Twilight/Dusk photography
    - Floor Plans
    - Matterport 3D Walk-Through
    - Agents Headshot
    - Voice over video


    To test ABC Photo & Videoís effectiveness in your marketing, you can arrange a free no-obligation
    trial now for your first project. If you need any additional information, please contact us at
    123-456-789 or [email protected]

    Regards,
    David, Principal Photographer

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    Re: Photography Business Letter US-English

    Hello Davidns, and welcome to the forum.
    Would you please correct the information on your profile page first?

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    Re: Photography Business Letter US-English

    Quote Originally Posted by Davidns View Post
    Hi Dear Mr Smith,

    ABC Real Estate Photo & Video, as Napaís leading studio in luxury real-estate marketing, offers the following exclusive services to top real estate agents.

    - Professional editorial HD photography
    - Cinematic full-HD video
    - Feature sheets
    - Aerial drone photo/video
    - Listing Website listing/media gallery
    - Agentís website
    - Twilight/dusk photography
    - Floor plans
    - Matterport 3D walk-through
    - Agent headshot
    - Voice-over video


    To test ABC Photo & Videoís effectiveness in your marketing, you can arrange a free no-obligation trial now for your first project. If you need any additional information, please contact us at
    123-456-789 or [email protected]

    Regards,
    David Lee,

    Principal Photographer
    .

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    #4

    Re: Photography Business Letter US-English

    If it's US English, it should start like this:

    Dear Mr. Smith:

    Note the period after "Mr." and the colon at the end. In the US, a comma is used with friends, relatives, Santa Claus, and other people you have an informal or familiar relationship with, but in a business letter or other formal correspondence, you should use a colon.
    Translator, editor and TESOL certificate holder, but not a teacher. Native speaker of American English (West Coast)

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    Re: Photography Business Letter US-English

    Note that a colon is never used that way in a formal letter in BrE.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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