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    In her marriage

    I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural. Do I need a comma after "husband"?

    In her marriage, Anna felt like in a gilded cage, surrounded with great wealth and the insanely jealous husband who controlled her every move.

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    Re: In her marriage

    Quote Originally Posted by Bassim View Post
    I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural. Do I need a comma after "husband"?

    In her marriage, Anna felt like she was in a gilded cage, surrounded with by great wealth and with the an insanely jealous husband who controlled her every move.
    See above.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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