yslamac
Member
- Joined
- Jan 24, 2014
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- Hong Kong
- Current Location
- Hong Kong
Below is a email written for the promotion and introduction a vancant unit to potential tenants, can anyone please kindly correct it? Thank you!:-D
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing on behalf of XXX Shopping Mall to introduce you our vacant unit on G/F.
XXX Shopping Mall locates in ABZ, which has a superb accessibility due to the presence of various transport means like MTR, bus, minibus, etc. This advantage provides a high flow of pedestrians to our shopping mall, creating many
XXX Shopping Mall is surrounded by different types of property like private residential estates, 5-star hotels, schools, and so on. This provides our mall with visitors from different backgrounds, therefore it is suitable for all business purposes.
Should you have any queries, please feel free to contact us. Thank you.
With warmest regards,
Mandy
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing on behalf of XXX Shopping Mall to introduce you our vacant unit on G/F.
XXX Shopping Mall locates in ABZ, which has a superb accessibility due to the presence of various transport means like MTR, bus, minibus, etc. This advantage provides a high flow of pedestrians to our shopping mall, creating many
XXX Shopping Mall is surrounded by different types of property like private residential estates, 5-star hotels, schools, and so on. This provides our mall with visitors from different backgrounds, therefore it is suitable for all business purposes.
Should you have any queries, please feel free to contact us. Thank you.
With warmest regards,
Mandy