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    At that moment Kathleen showed up with the hockey stick

    Hello.

    Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

    "At that moment Kathleen showed up with the hockey stick of Kelly in her left hand and a hammer in her right hand, Threatening to break it."


    I wanted to write the sentence in past tense.

    Thanks.

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    Re: At that moment Kathleen showed up with the hockey stick

    Quote Originally Posted by Nikitus View Post
    Hello.

    Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

    "At that moment, Kathleen showed up with Kelly's hockey stick in her left hand and a hammer in her right hand, threatening to break the stick."


    I wanted to write the sentence in past tense.

    Thanks.
    You're welcome.
    I'm not a teacher. I speak American English. I've tutored writing at the University of Southern Maine and have done a good deal of copy editing and writing, occasionally for publication.

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