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yslamac

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I have read a notice at a gym club, and I suspected that there is a number of mistakes on it. Can some please correct them if any?:-D

Recently, we found some of the lock have been blocked by tissue paper, we already report the case to the police department. To prevent the theft of personal belongings, be sure the locker is properly locked after closing it. The signal light will change to red once it is locked. If you found any locker cannot lock properly, please contact our receptionist.
 

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I [STRIKE]have[/STRIKE] read a notice at the gym, [STRIKE]club,[/STRIKE] and I suspect [STRIKE]ed[/STRIKE] that there [STRIKE]is[/STRIKE] are a number of mistakes [STRIKE]on[/STRIKE] in it. Can someone please correct [STRIKE]them if[/STRIKE] any mistakes they find? :-D

Recently, we found some of the locks on the lockers [STRIKE]have been[/STRIKE] blocked by tissue paper. We have already reported those cases to the police department. To prevent the theft of personal belongings, be sure the locker is properly locked after closing it. The signal light will change to red once it is locked. If you [STRIKE]found[/STRIKE] find any locker cannot be locked properly, please [STRIKE]contact[/STRIKE] report that to our receptionist.
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I would use "... please report it​ to our receptionist."
 
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