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    #1

    The play would probably have

    Would you please correct the mistakes in my sentence? Is my punctuation correct?

    The play would probably have ended in a disaster had it not been for a main actor who had given one of his best performances ever.

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    #2

    Re: The play would probably have

    I would:
    -remove "a" before disaster.
    -add "the" before "main actor".
    -change "had given" to "gave".
    I am not a teacher or a native speaker.

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