yslamac
Member
- Joined
- Jan 24, 2014
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- Hong Kong
- Current Location
- Hong Kong
Below is my cover letter, can someone please correct the mistakes in it? Many thanks!:-D
I had been working for a company which both serves as the management office and the leasing department of a commercial building and several shops on the ground floor. For leasing, it was my responsibility to go through all the procedures to let and take over premises, which includes but not limited to the issuance of offer letter, preparation of formal tenancy agreement, update of the tenancy schedule, handover and takeover of premises and etc. This has given me a complete picture of leasing and the tactics in dealing with different clients.
As for the part of property management, I was required to serve notices and letters to tenants under circumstances like purchase of insurance for their premises, suspension of electricity, etc. I believe such practices in these months have furnished me the proper business writing style when dealing with clients who are of higher education.
I would like to further my knowledge on both leasing and property management areas. Your post matches my career goal in the long haul. I believe working in a well-structured company provides me the chance to learn the proper ways of handling tenancy matters. Both experience and attitude count when it comes to working, and I want to contribute what I have learnt to your company.
Thank you very much for reading this cover letter, I look forward to your favorable reply.
I had been working for a company which both serves as the management office and the leasing department of a commercial building and several shops on the ground floor. For leasing, it was my responsibility to go through all the procedures to let and take over premises, which includes but not limited to the issuance of offer letter, preparation of formal tenancy agreement, update of the tenancy schedule, handover and takeover of premises and etc. This has given me a complete picture of leasing and the tactics in dealing with different clients.
As for the part of property management, I was required to serve notices and letters to tenants under circumstances like purchase of insurance for their premises, suspension of electricity, etc. I believe such practices in these months have furnished me the proper business writing style when dealing with clients who are of higher education.
I would like to further my knowledge on both leasing and property management areas. Your post matches my career goal in the long haul. I believe working in a well-structured company provides me the chance to learn the proper ways of handling tenancy matters. Both experience and attitude count when it comes to working, and I want to contribute what I have learnt to your company.
Thank you very much for reading this cover letter, I look forward to your favorable reply.
