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    #1

    After a few minutes walking, Kevin threws the special stone

    Hello.

    Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

    "After a few minutes walking, Kevin threws the special stone, which he found near his home, against a wall. A hobo approached him".

    Thanks

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    #2

    Re: After a few minutes walking, Kevin threws the special stone

    Take a look at the verb after "Kevin". Does it look correct to you?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: After a few minutes walking, Kevin threws the special stone

    And it isn't the only mistake.

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    Re: After a few minutes walking, Kevin threws the special stone

    Dear emsr2d2:

    First of all, thanks for your help.

    "After a few minutes walking, Kevin threw the special stone, which he found near of his home, against a wall. A hobo get closer to him".

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    Re: After a few minutes walking, Kevin threws the special stone

    Quote Originally Posted by Nikitus View Post
    Dear emsr2d2:

    First of all, thanks for your help.

    "After a few minutes' walking, Kevin threw the special stone, which he had found near of his home, against a wall. A hobo get closer to approached him".
    See above.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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